Study and create metaphors to improve fluency.
After reading the paired texts, direct students’ attention to the two metaphors in the poem. Remind students that a metaphor describes something by saying that it is something else.
In the poem, Hughes says that without dreams, “Life is a broken-winged bird that cannot fly” and “Life is a barren field/Frozen with snow.” Ask students what these two metaphors have in common. In both, Hughes compares life without dreams to something that can’t function as it is meant to. Hughes is saying that life without dreams can’t function as it should: It can’t progress with purpose and meaning.
Now ask students to come up with their own metaphors that mean the same thing. Ask, “What are some other examples of things that can’t work the way they should?”
If students need some inspiration, provide these sentence starters:
- Without dreams, life is a bicycle without . . . (wheels)
- Without dreams, life is a restaurant without . . . (food/customers)
- Without dreams, life is a swimming pool without . . . (water)
- Without dreams, life is a boat . . . (full of holes)
- Without dreams, life is a party with no . . . (guests)
- Without dreams, life is a guitar with no . . . (strings)
- Without dreams, life is a smartphone with no . . . (service)
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